Puzzles where you have to modify all answers before entering them into the grid are not my favourite. It normally means that you have to “cold solve” half the clues before you can make headway. Not my strong suit, but fortunately in Ho I have an ally who is very good at this, so, after some answer swapping, I was able to make some progress. The rubric read:
A letter must be removed from each defined answer and placed in a perimeter cell, thereby reproducing a thematic work and implementing a line from it. A letter removed from an across answer is entered in the appropriate left or right cell in the row containing the answer; letters removed from top/bottom down answers in each column are entered in an analogous way. Every clue contains an extra word that must be removed before solving; solvers will find the first and last characters of these words helpful. Solvers must highlight the collection in which the work features.
A lot to do here: 1) solve clues, 2) move letters to perimeter, 3) identify extra words, 4) make sense of first and last letter messages, not necessarily in that order!
I wrote down all the letters I had got from the first and last characters of extra words. The first letters seemed to be repetitious, but not instantly yielding any message. The start of the last letters though was MA???LM??LAREN which looked promising. It was followed by information apparently relating to a FAMOUS SUPREME TEAM. This was worth a google and yielded the album cover shown. When filled out with the missing extra words, the last characters (note NOT letters, as they include the apostrophe from laboratories’) spelled:
MALCOLM MCLAREN AND THE WORLD’S FAMOUS SUPREME TEAM
This referred to a track McLaren made using the HipHop techniques featured on the radio show THE WORLD’S FAMOUS SUPREME TEAM SHOW. The track in question was BUFFALO GALS, a spoof square dance with McLaren as “caller”. The “lyrics” include the immortal lines
First buffalo gal go around the outside, round the outside, round the outside (you know it)
Two buffalo gals go around the outside, ’round the outside, ’round the outside
Three buffalo gals (baaa) go around the outside (baaa, ba, ba)
Four buffalo gals (baaa) go around the outside, ’round the outside (baaa),
’round the outside (baaa)
Four buffalo gals go around the outside and dosie doe your partners (baaa)
The last line is the one referred to in the rubric: reproducing a thematic work and implementing a line from it.
Pretty clearly the four outside lines should all contain BUFFALO GALS. The single was later included in an album called DUCK ROCK 1A/16A to be highlighted in the grid. All that remained was to complete the grid fill and move the necessary letters to the outside. The first letters of the extra words give four anagrams of BUFFLO GALS.
I found it strangely unfulfilling in the end, I was perhaps expecting too much, A lot of slog for only medium reward, I wasn’t tempted to listen to the track. Not my cup of tea!
Thanks anyway Serpent.
As shown in the following grid, the buffalo gals have to be facing each other or they can’t dosie do.
Across | |||
Clue definition ExtraworD | Answer | Grid | Wordplay |
1 SentimentalisM avoids term of endearment (4) | DUCKS | S + DUCK | Double definition – avoids & term of endearment |
4 BarracudA harried bluegill presenting an easy target (7) | GULLIBLE | GULLILE + B | [BLUEGILL]* |
10 Representative of Geography Department in university’s raised LegaL areas (6) | UPLANDS | L + UPANDS | I think it’s: PLAN (representative of geography + D(epartment) inside U’S (university’s) But I’m not too happy with that |
12 Fall out endlessly, getting upset in UncharacteristiC entanglement (4) | AFOUL | AFOL + U | [FAL(l) OU(t)]* |
15 Collection of AudiO books about lives contains foreign characters (4) | IOTAS | A + IOTS | OT (books) + A(bout) in IS (lives) |
16 Congregation’s left to go to river in FulL dress (4) | FROCK | ROCK+ F | FLOCK (congregation) minus L + R(iver) |
17 Irate cast behind GreenrooM close to starting spat (5) | GAITER | G + AITER | (startin)G + [IRATE]* |
18 Citizen returned FroM call following endless worry (6) | FREEMAN | REEMAN + F | NAME (call) + FRE(t) worry |
19 Look daunted about English source of OpportunistiC disease (7) | LOCOWEED | O + LCOWEED | LO (look) + COWED (daunted) round E(nglish) |
20 Fresh AppareL for example worn by elite guards (4) | SASSY | SSSY + A | SAY (for example) round SS (elite guards) |
22 Embrace and fondle LolitA in an inappropriate way (5) | ENFOLD | L + ENFOD | [FONDLE]* |
24 America pretty much squandered available LabouR (5) | USABLE | USABE + L | USA (America) + BLE(D) (most of squandered) |
27 ActivE conflict fostered by commercial grant (4) | AWARD | A + WARD | WAR (conflict) in AD (commercial) |
29 Make up OrigiN of revolt started by company representative (7) | COMPRISE | CMPRISE + O | CO(mpany) + MP (representative) + RISE (revolt) |
31 Insect, having swallowed brightly coloured FleA, runs away gracefully (6) | FLUIDLY | F + LUIDLY | FLY round LURID minus R(uns) |
33 GentlemeN deplore beginning to go on about tense crowds (5) | REGRET | RERET + G | G(o) + RE (on) in (crowds) RE (about) + T(ense) |
35 Telegraph ForceD to replace leader with following story (4) | FABLE | F + ABLE | CABLE (telegraph) wirh C replaced by F(ollowing) |
36 Card to ArtisT singer returned (4) | TAROT | TROT + A | TO + RAT (singer in sense of informant) reversed |
37 Speculate porter leaves inn UnderstrengtH (4) | GUESS | U + GESS | GUINNESS (porter) minus INN |
38 Letters abused supporter of LegislativE board (6) | TRESTLE | TRESTE+ L | [LETTERS]* |
39 BylaW consumes old rate to split honours (7) | OBSESSES | B + OSESSES | SESS (old tax – rate) in OBES (honours) |
40 Proud bosses say they underplayed diva’s SolO show initially (4) | STUDS | STUD + S | Say They Underplayed Div’s Show initial letters |
Down | |||
Clue definition | Answer | Grid | Wordplay |
1 Suspect bad rule created BordeR to last (6) | DURABLE | B + DURALE | [BAD RULE]* |
2 Rejected players FeeL out of condition (6) | CAST-OFF | F + CASTOF | CAST (players) + OFF (out of condition) |
3 Cutting edge FielD understood missing week involves uncertainty (4) | KNIFE | F + KNIE | KNE(w) round IF (uncertainty) |
5 Laboratories’ result wasted five years (5) | LUSTRE | L + USTRE | [RESULT]* |
6 John Milton’s said “Set OtherS free” (5) | LOOSED | O + LOSED | LOO (john) + SED (said, according to Milton) |
7 Generosity reportedly represented by capital of GulF State (6) | LARGESS | G + LARESS | Capital of “State” is a “large S” |
8 Pub LasagnA could be less fattening (4) | LOCAL | L + LOCA | lo-cal – less fattening |
9 Vet SeldoM likes periodically culling deer (3) | ELKS | S + ELK |
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11 Admired socialist AntiherO supporting American party (5) | ADORED | A + DORED | A(merican) + DO (party) + RED (socialist) |
13 Unionist blanked in famous ApercU possibly is furious (4 | FOAMS | A + FOMS | [FAMO(u)S]* |
14 UselesS animal’s fault ultimately painted out by Stubbs? (5) | VICUNA | U + VICNA | VICE (fault) with the E replaced by UNA (Stubbs) |
21 Part of group’s membership fees UpsetS establishment’s case (5) | SUBSET | SBSET + U | SUBS (membership fees) + E(stablishmen)T |
23 GurU worshipped female theologian blocking works on Sabbath (6) | GODDESS | ODDESS + G | DD (theologian) in GOES (works) + S (Sabbath) |
24 Outcry when professional meets amateur in sport upset ArchbishoP (5) | UPROAR | UPROR + A | RU (sport) reversed round PRO(fessional) + A(mateur) |
25 Hunger strike perhaps inspires rage in most reasonable FolloweR (6) | FAIREST | AIREST + F | FAST (hunger strike) round IRE (rage) |
26 Ran and ran without support BrassierE twisting (6) | BEETLED | EETLED + B | BLED (ran) round TEE (support) reversed |
28 Queen’s AlbuM covers trouble panel members (4) | RAILS | RILS + A | R’S (Queen’s) round AIL (trouble) |
29 Reluctant Civil Service accepts bits of OverduE material (5) | CLOTHS | CLTHS + O | CS (Civil Service) round LOTH (reluctant) |
30 Evergreen LocusT tree from the south includes climbing strain (5) | MYRTLE | MYRTE + L | ELM (tree) round TRY (strain) reversed |
32 Casually makes smooth transposition down for opening LinE of sad song (4) | LUBES | UBES + L | BLUES is a sad song and the B has transposed down |
34 Holidays in France and Spain arranged around FiestA (4) | FETES | ETES + F | France + E (Spain) + SET (arranged) reversed |
35 Oranges regularly SeeM to evolve into staple food (3) | SAGO | AGO + S | [OrAnGeS]* (regularly |
Seems a long time ago now
Superb puzzle. I’d forgotten it was GALS so looked it up when I saw all these buffalos around the perimeter. I never saw the the title of the act at the time but I knew Malcolm was involved(especially in banking his share)First time i saw scratching.
Thanks Serpent and Hihoba
I enjoyed this one a lot in the end and found it very clever (even though the “song” isn’t particularly classic in my view). However it took a while to get going, and only when I found Malcolm McLaren did it all fall into place.
As with all answer-modification puzzles there are two key things to figure out:
– Which letters to remove
– And where to put them
For the first point, we don’t have any hints except “the first and last letters of removed words will be useful”, so it took time to realise the first letters were the ones to remove, but it was very satisfying when I did
For the second point, I couldn’t decide whether “appropriate” in the rubric a letter removed from an across answer is entered in the appropriate left or right cell in the row containing the answer meant that left letters would go left and right ones right – or whether it just meant “wherever it makes sense for the outside entry”. In the end, it was left=left and right=right (as well as top=top and bottom=bottom) so I don’t know if the wording was intentionally vague, or just me being obtuse?
Either way a tough effort but well worth it.
Experience & comments very similar to arnold @2: first letter of each removed word is the letter to be removed from the answer to that clue. And just a little uncertainty about “appropriate left or right cell”.
In 37a for example, I never understand how “porter leaves inn” is interpreted as “inn leaves porter”. Someone did try to explain once but I always forget.
Anyway, thanks to Serpent for a moderately challenging puzzle, and to Hihoba for the blog. (Your first word should be “puzzles” not “puzzlers”.)
I enjoyed this a lot more than Hihoba, but had a different journey: the first and last letters of the redundant words weren’t making sense to me, so I ignored them, and concentrated on the grid (I didn’t share Arnold and HolyGhost’s sense of ambiguity about which way the transposed letter would slide). After flirting with Buffalo Bill (e.e. cummings poem?), McLaren’s old hit came to mind, and only then did I see him in the last letters of removed words. I never did get what the first letters were doing, so thanks to Hihoba and other commenters for the explanation. And thanks to Serpent for the challenging dance.
I didn’t got far enough with this to spot the theme, and I can see now that I knew nothing about it anyway. (The name Malcolm McLaren is only vaguely familiar.)
I was interested in the blogger’s comments about cold solving. That’s something I practise for fun from time to time, even when it is not necessary, and I have become pretty good at it. Success depends more on the quality than the pitch of the clues: tough clues take longer, but a particular quality that I call clarity makes cold solving not just possible but also very enjoyable.
I started quite brightly with this puzzle in the bottom right, and for a while I enjoyed working up the grid, but still keeping mainly to the right as the left was less tractable. At about the half-way point, though, the puzzle had become a slog, and I was happy to stop. The clues, when I could unravel them, were very good, but the surplus words were too much of a hindrance, and the displaced letter device seemed to compound the difficulty.
It’s rare for me to be defeated by the clues rather than the theme (which is a much more familiar experience for me). I shall just hope for better luck next time.
I’m sorry I could not do justice to a puzzle by this setter, whose seven previous Inquisitors I thoroughly enjoyed.
H___G____ @3. I think you need to read “leaves” as “leaves behind”.
Also, on Hihoba’s behalf, I’ve fixed “puzzles”.
The letter moving gimmick made it a slow start but then I saw a BUFFALO emerging in the top row and, being familiar with the theme, things accelerated greatly and I didn’t find this a slog at all. But in my haste I managed to completely miss the message coming from the last characters.
Lovely blog…I note that the Buffalo gal on the bottom row is a little worse for wear.
Thanks to Serpent and Hihoba.
I enjoyed this, and when I realised BUFALO GALS was being repeated over and over again it put a big smile on my face. Very appropriate puzzle for the song and dance.
Thanks to setter and blogger.
@Phil K, she’s probably been going round the outside for some time, so not entirely surprising 🙂
First time post here, but I wanted to say how much I enjoyed this puzzle. The grid fill was a good degree of difficulty for me and I’m grateful to Hihoba for the explanations of clues that I failed to parse. For example Vicuña completely eluded me even though it seems obvious now. Many thanks to Serpent and Hihoba.
I am another who enjoyed this. An intimidating start but plenty of PDMs as things fell into place.
One feature that has not been raised so far is that in for the first half of the removed first letters the BUFFALO GIRLS are dosie-doeing*
Thanks to Serpent and Hi
*Other spelling are available
GILLILE in the first row should be GULLILE.
I enjoyed this puzzle, but unlike Hihoba, I couldn’t resist listening to the track. I’m afraid to report that it was an unpleasant experience, with no redeeming features.
Phil K @7
Oops – sorted on Hihoba’s behalf
“The first letters of the extra words give four anagrams of BUFFLO GALS”: there’s more to it than that — these are actually the letters that have to be moved to the perimeter from the clued word.
Dave W @11: “One feature that has not been raised so far is that in for the first half of the removed first letters the BUFFALO GIRLS are dosie-doeing” – that is simply because the letters of BUFFALO GALS run up the first column and down the last column.
Looks clever, but I’m afraid I got distracted and failed to finish this one. Thanks to Serpent and Hihoba anyway.
The official solution in the i yesterday omitted the extra touch of rotating letters so the gals would face each other.
HG @15. I have only just read your response to my comment @11 and it seems that I did not explain my point very well. I was referring to the first letters of the EXTRA WORDS in the clues not the letters removed from the answers. In clue order, the first 22 of these are SBLUAFGFOALLAOFGFAULBS, where the letters of BUFFALOGALS interlace with themselves in the reverse direction – a bit like a dosey-doe. The last 22 seem to be completely random.
Dave W @17: The first letters of the EXTRA WORDS in the clues are exactly those letters removed from the answers. (See TonyG @14.)
Given that each row has two entries, the first, third, fifth, etc, generate letters that go into the left column and so have to spell BUFFALO GALS backwards; similarly, the letters from the second, fourth, sixth, etc, go into the right column and so have to spell BUFFALO GALS forwards. Hence the interlacing.
You say “The last 22 seem to be completely random.” – but that is not the case. If you sort the clues into column order (top to bottom then left to right), then the same thing happens: each column has two entries, the first, third, fifth, etc, give letters that go into the top row and so spell BUFFALO GALS forwards, whereas the letters from the second, fourth, sixth, etc, go into the bottom row and so have to spell BUFFALO GALS backwards. And once again they are interlaced.
HolyGhost@18: Ah yes! I had not spotted that. Thanks.